Page 20 fixed...

This is still page 20 but with improvements - especially the kissing posture in the middle panel, as critiqued by my wife and Miouwwww [link] and because I find the crit valid, so i fixed it.

Without changing much of Jo's pose from the previous Page 20 LINE ART [link] I made it look like the camera angle is slightly from below looking up at the two... and I think the embrace is a little more passionate.

I've also started screentoning, but this is far from finished...

Thanks for the input guys!